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Vore story Four

Warning, the following contains Soft Vore

"Why did I get myself into this mess?" Metal asked himself quietly. He was traveling through a desert, not unusual, except the part where he was traveling with a Dragon.

Eight years ago, Metal had lived a normal life in Cairo, Egypt. Then one day, exploring a back alley, he had found something strange. In a small corner, shaking out of fear was a Dragon, about the size of a medium dog. After assuring it that he wouldn't hurt it, as well as giving it a piece of bread, the Dragon spoke. "T-thank you." It had said, in a male voice.

"You can speak?" Metal had asked, curious. "Then can I have your name?"

"I-I don't know." he had answered, "Nobody gave me one."

"How about Ike?" Metal had said. "That sounds good."

From that day forward, Metal and Ike were good friends. Metal had found a secret oasis, hidden from the city, so he sneaked Ike there. Metal would visit him whenever he found the chance.

But, a week ago, everything had changed. By this time, Ike had grown into a big Dragon, about as tall as a house. That day, Metal's older sister had followed him to the oasis, and discovered his secret. She had ran back home, and called the police. Metal had known that she would, so after she went home, Metal and Ike set out across the desert.

"Metal? Are you with me?" Ike said, bringing Metal back to the present.

Metal shook his head, to clear any lingering thoughts. "Yes, Ike." They had been walking for five hours today. Metal opened his canteen, and went to take a drink. A single drop fell in his mouth. "Could you do me a favour? Could you fly up and see if there is an oasis nearby?" He asked.

"Sure." Ike said, jumping into the air. Metal watched as Ike flew around a bit. "He soon came back down. "I see one, about a day's walk."

"Let's go then." Metal said, and then the pair started walking. But soon, Metal's body couldn't handle the lack of water.

Metal collapsed in the sand. "Metal! You alright?!" Ike said, sounding scared. But, just to ruin the moment, Ike's stomach growled.

Metal ignored it, and said, "I can't make it to the oasis, if I don't get water in five soon, I'll die."

Ike's stomach growled again, which gave him an idea. "I'll get you there," Ike said, "Hold still."
"What are you- umff!" Metal said, as Ike's mouth engulfed Metal's upper body. Ike slowly used his tongue to move Metal into his maw. He licked Metal all over, to Metal's discontent.

"Can you stop that?" Metal shouted.

"Sorry..." Ike said with his mouth full. He continued his work. He started swallowing Metal, Which put a large amount of pressure on Metal's body. Metal found it hard to breath, because every time he opened his mouth, a large amount of saliva would splash in it. He eventually ended up in his friend's stomach pouch. Metal just laid against the pink walls, listening to the beating of Ike's heart. He felt Ike take off, and fly in some direction. But he couldn't help falling asleep.

A few minutes later...

"Wake up Metal!" Ike said, nudging his friend awake.

"Huh?" Metal said, sitting up.

"We're here." Ike said, showing Metal the oasis. Metal bent down to take a drink. "Thank you, Ike." Metal said, taking a large drink.
OK, I needed a break from writing the book, so I wrote this. Please feel free to tell me how i did.
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RyuumaruOrochi Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
cool!!!
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Pheonix1996 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Boy, Metal must really be a heavy sleeper. And his sister sounds like a total bitch for calling the cops on him. nice job on this one. Although, I'm not sure that I would have named the dragon Ike.
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mtealshock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Writer
ya, Ike was a last minute call, not proud of it, and Metal is a heavy sleeper. His sister was scared, it happens all the time in movies. Also, FOR ANYONE READING THIS: I would appreciate minimal Swear words on my comments! :explosion:
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Pheonix1996 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
I apologize for my usage of such terms
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mtealshock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Writer
It's OK, I just was annoyed that two people said that, and on my very first piece of work, I asked for minimal swearing. :(
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Eragon007 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
metal is always getting eaten and when he does, he falls asleep. good story anyway
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mtealshock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Writer
The sleeping is because I would have to figure something for him to do in the stomach, Besides being digested. and sleep is easy in a nice warm place, with a soft place to lay, and a pulsing rhythm to lull you to sleep :XD:
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Dragondude97 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
awsome story loved it

his sister must have been a real bitch if she called the cops on him :rage:

awsome
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mtealshock Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Writer
She was scared, What would you do if you saw a Dragon as big as your house with all the "Evil Dragon" stories out there?
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Dragondude97 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
I'd invite it to dinner
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